Hey, finally got round to playing your game :)
Loved the musical intro. it did a great job of setting the tone of the game and was really well made
Trying not to spoil the *character selection screen* but I was blown away. seriously well made and felt very Undertale. I was really enjoying it and enjoyed how none of the game play was repeated.
I think your current intro is a great setup for the game. I lost the first fight at the very end because I did not blind her. The fight had lots of twists and turns that made it very exciting
Some feedback, I cant give much sorry as I simply enjoyed it and dont play these kinds of games often:
An option to skip Rebel girl's fight intro when you retry would be great. You have to go through a dozen text boxes to challenge her again. I am sure it is useful for players who are confused and trying again but I wanted to get right back in there and try again personally.
Your attack option changed to 'FAIL' on the second turn which makes sense after seeing how lame your hero is ;) but I assumed fail meant to surrender rather than you sucking. This made me try status instead which was a nice touch but ate up my second turn, Having it read something like 'FIGHT?' with the question mark could be a fun way to show how uncertain the player is of their hero's attacks while not being misleading.
The itch page, it was hard for me to understand what kind of game this was based on the page. Feels like you put passion and storytelling before selling the product since all the details I can get are story extracts and recommendations. Its great to see a more passionate presentation of the game and how you want to present your game is up to you. I think a quick summary of the game before the story extract would help me press the download button and know what I am getting into. Clearly though you are having no trouble finding players to try the game so this isn't a huge problem.
Overall no bad criticism. I really enjoyed it and am actually interested to see where it goes next. Glad I came across you and this game, Great job!