Interesting story well the first bit i saw had me very intrigued. It is however stuck tho like the below comments mentioned. So can't read past the first page. Hope it gets fixed soon id love to read this. The premise seems cool. Is it a romance story tho? With RO's it's not really mentioned in the features
Edit: saw the bug was fixed ♥️😇
The story is cool. I enjoyed it. The part where you had to choose why you were at the river made me laugh because i chose the funniest choice and picking your name and having to insert it took me out completely. "Namey mcname" is definitely hilarious..
There are a few Grammer issues and some spelling but again that's a given with like every project especially new ones. The backdrop might be a bit dark for most to read. It's okay but I needed my glasses to read properly. Those are my only notes really. I am following in hopes you update it when you are ready and I get to read more of the great story you are writing. 🤞