You know, this is actually good. Like some other comment before me, this reminds me of Eternum (which is a compliment). Like, there's an actual plot - and it's interesting. And I want to know what happens.
I'm usually not a fan of the whole "Main character is irresistible, girls fall at his feet" either but you know what? You've made it as real and un-cringe as possible. I actually like him. Another surprise for me.
Well done.