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(4 edits)

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Review Summary

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[ + + + - - ]  ::  ENJOYMENT

[ + + + - - ]  ::  CREATIVITY

[ + + - - - ]  ::  PRESENTATION

It's a cute little game. I think with some time and love it could mature into something genuinely memorable.


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Rubric / How I Measure The Score

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[ + - - - - ]      1 - Missing

[ + + - - - ]     2 - Somewhat Present

[ + + + - - ]    3 - Present

[ + + + + - ]   4 - Well Done

[ + + + + + ]  5 - Outstanding


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Detailed Review

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[ + + + - - ] :: ENJOYMENT

It was a fun little game. Good work on the obstacles. If you smooth the camera and keep it centered closer to the player I think that would help a lot. I'd also have loved to see more levels.

Edit: Extra star because my critique was an issue of presentation, not of experience. It's a solid design and I did have fun, even if it needs some more TLC.

[ + + + - -] :: CREATIVITY

Great idea reversing gravity. I don't know that it communicates the idea that the role of gravity is reversed. It might be fun to add a floating apple and make some science jokes.

Edit: I'm giving an extra star for creativity. After all, it was quite creative.


[ + + - - - ]  ::  PRESENTATION

It's pretty straightforward. Again, the camera could be more smooth, and you could have some sort of transition between levels.

(+1)

Thanks for the feedback! I fixed the camera

Looking forward to seeing the upload after the jam :)

Confirming my reviews. Gave you an extra star for enjoyment and creativity. I think that's more appropriate for your game. Thanks!

(+1)

I think also Presentation should be extra stars.