You've picked good music and a good font. It was artsy enough, I was blown away.
The writing is good, and the creativity on display is good as well. I wish I had a level select at the end so I could replay only the "jobs" I liked.
I enjoyed failing in the game as well. Reading that dastardly review was very funny. The art wasn't distracting from the main attraction, and I liked the variety of mini-games.
A perfect game for a game jam