first! i like the idea you're trying to create, the renders look pretty basic right now, but obviously experience = improvements! i think you could have an amazing novel here, if done right, keep up the good work!
Hey thanks for the feedback!
This is actually my second ever project with RenPy (and first with KP for the CGs) so i'm glad they came out basic and not terrible haha.
Once I get the main four rivals in I'm planning to take a quick swing back through and redo some of the ah... sillier scenes like aoi's death scene who i hadn't figured out how to properly use the skeleton rigging for. Or any others that didn't come out quite right.
Till then any other errors spotted or feedback is appreciated as well and i hope you enjoyed what i was able to put out thus far!