Commenting a bit later than usual! Been a bit busy with college related stuff D: As always, thank you so much for the new chapter.
Typos I found for chapter seven:
- "You adjust your cap and walk across the street.", friend instead of frend in "Frend of the family."
- "You are not detective." There should be an "a" between are and not.
- "The air in the Black Swan feels darker than normal.", "It's scary," Last sentence on that line has an extra quotation mark.
- Page starts with "It's evening, and by the time Detective Peterson leads you to a dinner, it's dark outside." I think it should be diner instead of dinner, but again, english is not my first language so I'm not sure. D:
- On the same page, there should be a comma in "What did you see Robert?" I think??
- Page starts with what the MC chose to be their giveaway that danger is near. (In my case, it's "You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.") Paragraph starts with "Glassy eyes of dead patrons stare at you.", diner has extra n.
- "Quiet." Paragraph starts with "You move into his booth", not instead of nto.
I also ran into a little issue?? Every time there was a noun related to my gender, like miss, for example, a little dollar sign would pop up at its left. Not sure if it's just me.
Keep up the good work! It's always such a pleasure to find a new chapter posted, and your incredible writing always makes me really get into the story. Again, thank you so much. :)