Thank you for your detailed and constructive feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the atmosphere!
Super happy that you noticed I put some time into fiddling with the smaller details too lol. <3
I appreciate your observations about the writing. Breaking up longer dialogs into smaller segments is a great suggestion to make them more approachable and engaging. I will also try and differentiate the characters better. I 100% agree that some characters (even unreleased/cut ones) are almost copies of each other.
Thank you again!