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It looks pretty great so far! There's obviously not much in the way of content as of yet, but that's to be expected, after all. If I were to offer any criticism, I think I'd have to say that the transitions tend to be pretty jarring, with how abrupt they are. As such, it might be a good idea to get someone to help out with the overall writing style, maybe. Unless this was just your first pass made with the intention of refining the plot later on, in which case, ignore my comment, heh. 

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thank you very much for the feedback. :) I do want to ask did you play the mini games in the arcade? I will deffinally take into account your advice while working on future patches for the game. 

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oh by the way did you check out the arcade minigames or collect any action figures from the duck game?

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I did play the minigames, and they're nice little distractions. I only played the duck game once, but I don't think I got anything from it. There *seemed* to be a "+1" pop-up on the screen, but I couldn't find anything new anywhere afterwards.

As an aside, the balloon dart minigame seems superfluous to me. If you plan on keeping it, you might consider making it tie in to progression somehow. For instance, it being the same as the "cum-on-tits" minigame, but having a different purpose?

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so the minigames are a way to make money for the most part. There are 10 ultra rare action figures you can get as well as gift items from the duck game. Gift items can also be bought from the arcade shop and coffee shop. There will be more useage for money in future updates. :)