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A little critique

Positives: It's really funny, everyone feels in character, it feels true to Spooky Month. The visuals are beautiful and the character portraits are on-point. The character text boxes having visuals to show personality was a nice touch, as well as each character having a unique font for their names. Although I found Bob's to be a little small and unnoticeable.

Critique: The menu could use some work. A lot of stuff is really hard to see and I think that either adding a backing or altering the text color itself would help. Also, since the visual for the title screen is an open cookbook I think having the menu options on a different page of the book could be a fun idea, I know it would be more work on the artist so if this is not something that's able to be done it's completely understandable, just a suggestion. Also-also I think it would be really good if we had the ability to alter text sizes, for either dialogue boxes or background text. I found it a little jarring when each character got a different font, I understand what you're going for and found it really cute but it's a bit distracting and sometimes hard to read, however, changing each character's name in a different color and font worked really well.

I understand game making is hard, and I wanted to make sure you got good feedback to make your game the best it can be. Overall it's a really good demo, just needs polish but I think you're going in the right direction.