Thank you, Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
I put a lot of effort into trying to make this vision of a modern day Gensokyo feel real through the dialogue. I'm a big fan of diagetic dialogue, so I tried to make everything as diagetic as possible. I'm glad it paid off.
If this sort of writing style interests you, we are working on a Cyberpunk Visual Novel called Code.Breaker(), which I am the main writer for. A lot of what I have learned from Houou ga Gotoku went into that game as well. It also features chill hang-out scenes where you get to talk to the characters about them, others and the world. It's still in development, but maybe worth a look if you like what we did here? The artist for Tsuki ga Gotoku also works with me on Code.Breaker().