I have to say, I surprised my self with hove much I loved MNF. I usually want a little more mysticism and fantasy in my VN. But I feel in love with the wholesomeness and the deep love which feels like the center theme. So I cant wait for the conclusion and the start of MNF2. Oh and Lucy = best girl <3 :P
It took a while for me to jump in and try MNM. Mainly because I don't rly like VN with those kind of character models. But I enjoyed MNF so much that I had to at least give it a fair try.
And I must say you rly upped your game. I could not put it down. Forgot both to eat and sleep. On multiple occasions. :P
The only grief I had. (and it might be a little nit-picky) is the end of chapter 3. It felt rly out of character for the MC to fall so easily into the trap. Even with the amnesia and that he is kind of a lovable goof. He does not come of as someone who is easily fooled. Specially when knowing that that he had to be careful and vigilante. The fact that everybody said it was weird should have raised a red flag for him.
It would have made more sense if he suspected it to be a trap. But went anyway because he wanted to end it by him self once and for all.
But like I said. It's a tiny problem I have with the story so far. And I teared up at the end of chapter 3. Over all it's a 9/10.
Keep up the good work! <3
The next update cant get here soon enough for both games. ^^