Art is great! Gameplay looks promising as well; I do enjoy point-and-click adventure games. However, if I were to play more, the broken English would probably start to get to me. I think it could make sense for the girl if she is supposed to seem more primitive, but the protagonist I'd imagine should have clearer dialogue. I know this is just a sample, but later on if a community gets formed you could consider asking for some proof readers to make sure it makes sense (I know compensation might worry you but some might do it for free, I'd be open to proof reading a few lines myself no charge). I say this since some dialogue was lost on me.