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Just finished all endings. Very unique look and feel to the game. The art is gorgeous! I like the mystical, mythical tone. One minor complaint that completely took me out of the story was the word 'Dad'. I really recommend using 'Father' instead. 'Dad' sounds way too modern, and in fact I almost laughed when I read it. I also recommend one more proofread, as I noticed spelling and punctuation issues. Otherwise, very interesting concept, and yeah, that art...<3. Thank you!

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Oh, proofreading... That is quite a valid point you made, as I rushed to publish it before the school deadline. I truly appreciate you pointing that out; it shows you paid close attention to the plot. I will keep you updated once I've fixed the script.

Thanks for all your comments!