Great story so far, Great work with the characters too, i actually care about them and their backstories. The sound effects were fun in chapter 7 and was nice to hear the notification when making progress with the girls, i seemed to miss those notifications in the first 6 chapters when it was visual only. The pacing of the h scenes were good imo, Didnt take too long to get to each scene, but were spaced far enough part it felt good.