Will send you a dm with the next batch of typos, etc.
About the minotaur bounty: Was it really only money? Think it was mentioned that he also wants to make up for the evil deeds of his kin and he also thinks to himself that he would normally go look for a village with a monster problem to stave off boredom if he wasn't injured. Or is he just telling himself that he did it only for the money because he refuses to acknowlege the other reasons?
Thanks for clarifying about Alonzo. It wasn't quite clear if he really invented those things or if he knew them from elsewhere and merely introduced them to wherever the mc is at rn. When talking about the dragon scales and teeth for example he says something along the lines of "if I can figure that out, we will have electrical light". That makes it sound as if electrical light is a known concept and he merely looks for a way to make it work in the manor with the materials on hand. That impression is further backed up by the fact that the MC just accepts that term without asking what exactly it refers to (even though its kinda obvious since they talked about the whole dragon scale thingy before Alonzo brought up that term (electrical light).
Ah ok, that explains the MC's choice of words when referring to the human empire.
Don't worry about the spelling mistakes and structural errors. When writing longer texts that's perfectly normal. Since I'm playing the game anyway it's no real trouble to point out the mistakes I notice while playing. Plus it helps me keep my own English skills sharp (not a native speaker). So typo hunting basically helps both you and me.
Looking forward to the next version. And don't worry about the wall of text. For one this reply of mine isn't exactly short either and for another I wouldn't be playing text-based games if a wall of text could scare me off.