this is a long comment since I just finished the novel and really looking forward to this novel so [spoiler]
Art
-Just as you look from the preview arts, you will certainly have a lot more beautiful views from this novel. It's beautiful, I can't much because it really is.
-The dialogues with a detailed backgrounds are amazingly well done
-character's design: the main cast (Reamus, Alen, Jymsar) designs are generic, but also outstanding, just like any side characters. I adore Follen and Marchedon design the most.
Characters
-Personalities: the main cast sometimes are childish and being strict are their whole personality at the beginning of the novel and some dialogues, but later on they got their character development and be likable. The side characters are not annoying and pushing the main cast to go further, good.
-Relationship between characters: Jymsar and other watchmen; it kinda cute, I don't have much to say. Alen and Chila; their interactions between two are short but we will learn further on on Alen's prespective, it can tell why the two acting these way, Alen acting toward Reamus and Alen's goal which is nice.
Plot
-Very confusing at the beginning, still confusing further on but not as diffucult as the beginning to catch up, really worth the time spending to this novel
-if you are looking to romanized the characters, then this is not the novel you looking for, it is a heavy plot with world building and lot to read, but the novel isn't finished so they will be more to look forward to
-There's a side non-canon that has an nsfw pics. I feel awkward going through Reamus and Marshall lmao, the art of them going at it are amazing is as good as any other backgrounds.
Decisions and Routes
This is the main issue I wanting to talk to the creator, GigaSaddle, I appreciate whether you wanting your plot and interactions to be, because I know it's using lot of times to having many routes
-There are too little interactions we can choose, only two options.
-Most of the decisions didn't do anything further to the plot, only few dialouges are changed. Such as; Anny's nails (I didn't see this one coming because it so random and why do this even a decision), the shadow's accept or reject (why is this an option when rejecting only changed the first few messages), truth or lie being umbral to Everwind (this one I expected the most but he spotted the lie kinda into his character)
-The only interact I see that changes the story is either stay with Alen or Jymsar, further when we chose who to stay with, there's only one decision and just one until it just a whole reading part, and that decision didn't push the story further or change the path anything.
[If you reading this until now, I recommend this novel]