It's kinda boring I would say, it doesn't have really any hook to it like an unique gameplay mehcanic or a very intriguing story.
I would say to remove the combat and focus on making the story more interesting, cause the enviroment seems like it could have a much rich story experience.
Also I would recommend eventually changing the RPG Maker stock sprite characters, cause it makes the tone a little less seriuous when I have 2 chibi guys following me lol.