First of all: I really hope your grandma recovers! You're an amazing grandchild for trying to support her with your game! It's not much, but I bought your game with what I could.
Second:
You have some stuff to improve. The graphics are awesome, but graphics alone don't make a game. I made a better "review" of what I mean by the end of the video.Other than that, you're going on a good direction here! The jumpscare got me good, and this game has a lot of potential. I really hope your grandma gets better, and gets to see the full game you'll make when it comes out =)