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Graphics are ok but I wonder if you're focusing on the scenes vs the gameplay. Music changing is also good but I would put a door over places that aren't open to the player. I would suggest diving into the story to differentiate this from other games and because that is what will draw in the audience.

I might have to rewrite my description. The entire purpose of the demo was for feedback on the visuals.