I like the drawing kind of style you're going for. The font is pretty cool too. I wonder if the that's all the same font size or if the letters really are that big like S and H. The concept is really nifty. Telepathically wielding a sword while stuck in an ancient codex. I could see an entire story come out of that. Since you have blades thrown at you anyways, it doesn't make much of a difference if the codex had a destination it was going to that once you reached, win something. It's more of a level based format or it could be a continuous based format where as you hit certain points, you get something fun to read in the codex or start to see different patterns of attacks. Might be more simple things like you start off with a plank of wood and gradually get a longer or thicker blade as you go on. The sword looks like it has some kind of gem embedded into it, so could even be magic that activates periodically. It could even have an ending where you free yourself from the inks of the pages. Overall, good presentation and a nice way to pass time. Only question that leaves me curious is what the background is. I think it's a sandy ground or maybe you're in a basement. We may never know.