Personally I’d love for the story to pick up the pace and cut some fluff.
Some of the last few updates have been tough to get through for me; I can only read so many scenes of “awkward but sweet and sincere romantic character interactions” in a row before I just lose interest. I also find that most of those scenes don’t really further the characterization as much as describe previously introduced traits again, and I find that boring, at this point.
Regarding that, when the protagonist’s inner monologue points out so often that other character’s actions are because of/show off a trait I find it a bit condescending or cringey, like the story doesn’t trust itself or the reader and thinks that the information won’t get across unless it’s pointed out. Basically, I think the story could use some “show don’t tell” for character traits.