Caribdis, you are incredible! I can't say I've played a lot of visual novels. Yours is by far the best though! I was looking for "porn" and what I got was an engrossing story I would look forward to day after day. I am blown away by the amount of effort that must have went into this.
I love your humor so much. Using things like sound together with closing in darkness with Luna's family got me every time, absolute genius. I can see where you pull a lot of inspiration from some anime out there and all sorts of stuff. I can't say enough good things about what you have created.
I will absolutely be telling other people about this in hopes it garners more support and you have more time to continue this masterpiece.