I've just finished the draft after downloading it about a week ago I think. For someone in their 40's and can still see bit of myself in the main character at that age this was a great story to read. I've never fit the stereotype and taken years to work out labels and/or if they where needed for me. The maturity to the writing/storytelling show the experience of the characters and I guess the revamp will help that come through more.
Spoiler alert!
For someone that has a very supportive family, but still had hard time coming out and the recovery from my perants shock. I would have love seeing Zack still getting on the train and standing up to his folks as that is a personal development I feel he would need even if his folks don't care etc, but then have Braden saving him, but then there was a mention that Zack wouldnt call for help