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For a very rushed short VN, this is really good! The art is really pretty, but can be creepy when it needs to be (both Kara and the MC are VERY cute). I love seeing the CGs. I also thought that the story would be shorter, but it turns out to be longer than I expected.

(Spoilers for the story down below)

From the start, I knew that Kara was suicidal, but I guessed wrong lol. I thought she killed her abusive husband out of accident and felt guilty about it, but it turns out to be slightly different than what I initially thought. I really like that though. The ending where you have the chance to play detective and figure out what's actually going on is pretty cool too!

Foppydoodles1 year ago(+2)

Awww I'm glad you liked it! I made the story a bit complex for my first VN since I love the psychological genre. I'll work on my cleaning up the art more hahaha. I planned to make the next game longer and me try to make more better music and learn how to draw backgrounds. (I also made all the music for this one too)

SPOILERS BELOW IF YOU DON'T WANT TO GET SPOILED

Kara does blame herself a lot (even though it wasn't her fault but she still stubbornly refuses the fact) and wanted to escape the burden of her action through overdosing herself. She's still conflicted whether she still loves her husband or not despite the abuse she faced. She has good intentions, but she's also selfish.

(Games that inspire me a lot in making VNs are Pheonix wright, angels of death, ddlc and other psychological horror games)

sylvan1 year ago(+1)

Woah you made the music yourself? That's really cool! And honestly, your art has its own charm and imo the rough lines works really well with the psychological genre. But it's always good thing to try and improve (I... also need to learn how to do backgrounds, I'm gonna cry at the thought of it-).

*Spoilers down below*

I see... Man, poor Kara ;-; At least she has a good ending with the MC though, those two are really cute.

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