For me, I usually give the most importance to the storyline. It's a cute, lovely romantic story. Nice twist of the story plot. One thing I'd like to know more is how Oliver lost his memories. Maybe you can put some interesting or even dramatic explanation on this. But it's still a great story.
With such a good story, the form (it's kind of a mix of comics, game, and movie :-) is a nice addition. With this form, it actually has many possibilities. For example, since there are some points players can select what to say, it can be something like "Choose your own adventures", with several branches and different endings. Of course it means a lot more efforts, but I'll pay at least USD 20 for such a game, haha.
Anyway, it's a great experience "reading" a fun, loving story in such interesting form. Thank you all for your efforts. I enjoy it very much.