Thank you for your great input!🤗 The expression "She fell down" means that she did not die. I did that because I wanted to show a special scene afterwards.
and, I agree that there needs to be a branch in the conversation with the guardian. I would add a process there to determine if she has encountered other mushroom girls.
And thank you for the idea of the scene where Tilo invites her to join her in her sweet scent. I would rewrite the text of that scene that way.