random typo:
scenes/ezri scenes/ezri_scene_5.rpy:153: acheive -> achieve
take it as positive feedback: I actually *read* your work :D
a slightly more interesting issue: the random_events_list (script::529) is w/o "bff 3", making at least the hint system (random events seen x/y) incorrect. dunno if there's more possible fallout, but skimming the code the array is only used to display the amount of possible random encounters.
edit: your scripts compared to wikipedia's list of common typos
./prologue.rpy:836: E "That one's a teeny bit bigger, I think it might have been the original bedroom before this house was converted to student accomodation." accomodation->accommodation ./scenes/scarlett.rpy:859: S "I can't beleive what happened at your sleepover, that was so amazing." ./scenes/art.rpy:325: PC_i "Wow, I can't beleive I touched Harriet's tits!" beleive->believe ./scenes/sleepover.rpy:2573: PC_i "[friend]'s about to spank Hannah, Ezri's going to start masturbating, and I think something might be happening bewteen Ashley and Scarlett!" bewteen->between ./PC_bedroom.rpy:137: PC_i "I did a little commision, and made a bit of cash." commision->commission ./PC_bedroom.rpy:129: "Small commisions" if subject_physics == False: commisions->commissions ./scenes/truth_dare.rpy:1647: PC "I'm still a little self concious, but you know, a dare's a dare!" concious->conscious ./scenes/scarlett.rpy:801: PC "Hey there's nothing to be embarrased about it, it was just some fun between friends!" ./scenes/scarlett.rpy:3662: PC "For a long time I was kind of embarrased by how big and all over the place they are." ./scenes/library_scenes.rpy:62: PC "{i}Oh crap, I don't want her to think I'm perving on her, I'm so embarrased...{/i}" ./scenes/library_scenes.rpy:97: LG "You looked embarrased that I caught you looking. Don't worry, I don't mind." embarrased->embarrassed ./scenes/hannah.rpy:3626: H "Oh, this is a little embarrasing..." ./scenes/hannah.rpy:3636: H "Oh, this is a little embarrasing..." ./scenes/scarlett.rpy:781: S "Oh god, can you believe at breakfast I told everyone I masturbated? That was so embarrasing!" ./scenes/scarlett.rpy:799: S "And I even masturbated in front of everyone! That's so embarrasing!" ./scenes/sleepover.rpy:862: S "Oh god, that was so embarrasing..." ./scenes/bff.rpy:952: BFF "Haha, it was embarrasing at the time, but weirdly it's one of my fondest memories now." ./scenes/bff.rpy:1792: BFF "Haha, it was embarrasing at the time, but weirdly it's one of my fondest memories now." embarrasing->embarrassing ./scenes/ezri.rpy:4549: PC_i "What the fuck, I can't do that! I'd die of embarrasment." ./scenes/ezri.rpy:4555: PC_i "What the fuck, I can't do that! I'd die of embarrasment." embarrasment->embarrassment ./scenes/art.rpy:16: HH "Exellent Ashley, coming along nicely, why don't you try the shading we talked about..." exellent->excellent ./scenes/ezri scenes/ezri_scene_5.rpy:946: PC_i "Her tongue focused more on my tight ring, and I let out a gutteral moan." ./scenes/ashley scenes/ashley_scene_5.rpy:1622: PC_i "I carefully withdrew my finger, and spread Ashley's cheeks before diving in. Her gutteral moans were immensely erotic." gutteral->guttural ./scenes/emily.rpy:286: Em "Hey, that could be construed as sexual harrasment you know!" ./scenes/emily.rpy:677: Em "Hey, that could be construed as sexual harrasment you know!" harrasment->harassment ./scenes/madelline.rpy:130: Mad "Well thanks [name], nice to know I'm so irresistable!" irresistable->irresistible ./script.rpy:1330: "{i}Description:{/i}" "{i}Teaches you the study practices skill, granting a permanant +1 bonus to all knowledge gains. 10 chapters.{/i}" ./script.rpy:1339: "{i}Description:{/i}" "{i}Teaches you the self-confidence skill, granting a permanant +1 bonus to all lewdness gains. 10 chapters.{/i}" ./script.rpy:1348: "{i}Description:{/i}" "{i}Teaches you the view-enjoyment skill, granting a permanant +1 bonus to all voyeurism gains. 10 chapters.{/i}" ./script.rpy:1357: "{i}Description:{/i}" "{i}Teaches you the seductress skill, granting a permanant +1 bonus to all affection gains. 12 chapters.{/i}" permanant->permanent ./scenes/ezri.rpy:424: PC "I really liked her watching me, it was a realy turn on." realy->really ./scenes/scarlett.rpy:5030: S "There's a little Chinese resturant not too far away that I've been wanting to try for a while now." ./scenes/ezri.rpy:288: PC "She took me to this really nice Chinese resturant." ./scenes/bff.rpy:201: PC "Well, we went out to a nice Chinese resturant..." resturant->restaurant ./scenes/freya.rpy:702: PC_i "Freya and I exchanged numbers, and we went our seperate ways." ./scenes/maple.rpy:669: PC_i "We went our seperate ways after that." ./scenes/living_room_scenes.rpy:1688: S "Wait what? You have a seperate hole for weeing?" ./scenes/emily.rpy:262: PC_i "Damn, we're going our seperate ways, should I say or do one last thing before she's gone?" ./scenes/emily.rpy:491: PC_i "I told her I couldn't stop to chat, and we carried on our seperate ways." ./scenes/emily.rpy:654: PC_i "Damn, we're going our seperate ways again, should I say or do one last thing before she's gone?" ./scenes/ashley scenes/ashley_scene_5.rpy:430: PC "I'm sorry to disappoint, but that's as far as it went. We had a nice chat, then went our seperate ways." seperate->separate ./scenes/random_events.rpy:810: PC_i "To my suprise, [friend] leapt out from her hiding spot..." ./scenes/scarlett.rpy:6360: S "I will, but I um, have a suprise for you first!" suprise->surprise ./scenes/hannah.rpy:1378: H "Would you mind stroking my head a little, then cuddling in bed wih me?" ./scenes/hannah.rpy:3828: H "Would you mind stroking my head a little, then cuddling in bed wih me?" wih->with