The story branches were quite engrossing and represented an interesting way of telling the story of a man via seemingly disconnected fragments. The descriptions would occasionally drag on, most notably in Wish Upon a Dandelion, but they would do well in describing the thoughts and sentiments of the characters. The large amount of typos makes it clear that this work was unfortunately rushed, but considering the sequence at the introduction, it's apparent that there are far greater plans for this work. I'm interested how this story will unfold, especially as the idea gets more developed!