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I downloaded this to play it during spring, not Christmas. It is a cute little visual novel with a unique art style. It it well made and the story is very light hearted and not dramatic. It will suit someone who is looking for a casual and fun gameplay. My one critique is the wording or the text of the game. I'm guessing it was not written by a native English speaker. It seems translated from another language and this made it difficult for me to fully get into the story. There were a lot of grammatical mistakes and the way some of the sentences were phrased seemed odd.  Please do not take my constructive criticism in a negative way. If the wording could be sorted out, this would increase the playability of this game. 

Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback! 😊💖 We’re so glad you enjoyed the art style and the lighthearted story! 

We really appreciate your constructive criticism about the text! We absolutely take that into account and understand how important clear and smooth language is for a better experience. We’ll definitely work on improving the wording and grammar in future updates to make the story easier to follow and more enjoyable for everyone.


Thanks again for sharing your thoughts! 🙏✨