Thank you for telling my story, when I showed it to Barry, he was very happy too! That guy was a great guy, I've always wondered what happened to him. I'm sure I won't see him again!
But in all seriousness. The writing, the story, the twists and turns were enough to spend an entire day off work on. This is really good stuff, Caribdis! At some point it became less about the smut (although that was exceptional, especially Aiko's first scene, but that's my sort of thing).
But from the pop culture references to the funnier scenes, everything was just so fantastically written and developed. Your praise and reputation is incredibly well deserved, and if I had the cash, I would support you 100%.
The evolution of Tom and Jack were just... So sweet, and it felt good to absolutely root for them. Even the walkthroughs didn't spoil any of the story. You are a wonderful storyteller, and an even better world builder. Kudos on a job well done, and I look forward to Eternum when you are done with it!
Stabby Mike OUT! (?)