I already really love this VN. I am going to be brutally honest, and say that the writing could use some spellcheck, as there are a lot of grammar - and spelling mistakes. However.. That is not central and I don't love the story any less for it. Maybe get chat-Gpt to run through the script in little sections, for future updates? I imagine that might be quite painless, enabling you to continue focusing on writing, rather than proof reading :)