Lots of choices for sure! I really think this needs more writing tho. It would be useful to add more story background throughout the passages: Bits of prose that explain who the main character is, where are they, who is this monster, etc. As it is now, it feels more like a pure exercise in learning Twine, and not quite a story. It is a first attempt for a prototype, but definitely needs more creative development to become a game. My two cents.