In retrospect, the fact that Hindrances were missing should've been way more obvious to me. I think I could get away with splitting the lower third of the edges list for it?
(It feels important to have on the main spread, to me.)
Fixed the lack of a space for Hindrances, here!
and the alternative Version 2 is less compact, but has a dedicated Notes section.
Personally I've never found much need to have a dedicated space for Ancestry or species abilities (I've always just counted them among my hindrances and edges) so I may get around to this, but I quite like how compact it is at the moment, and having to squeeze that in might be difficult.