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There was a part where a teacher was almost killed and the student meets with the teacher after and says something along the lines of "I'm glad you weren't killed.  If you were our education would have few prospects."   I was like, "What?! How am I supposed to interpret this ?  Is this kid a psychopath?"

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For real. I mean, it literally starts out with MC drinking with Sam and telling her basically everything that was supposed to be secret from chapter one and she's just like "Wow. Anyway, about the tournament." 

Then you discover any of the women MC didn't get with in chapter one are now available, but only because they were all banging Jacob before he kicked the bucket, so their all basically his leftovers 😂

Ashley's character is terribly written as well. I think basically the only improvement was getting rid of the Audrey triangle, since it didn't really make sense how it was. 

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Oh, I almost forgot that anytime someone is saying important story things, MC is just having internal dialog about their bodies the whole time. It might have been funny if used once, but it's several times and overall boring and detrimental.