Love the summary, on it and in it, and the cover is very clean! I love the little spider and corner decorations. (purchased my copy here before downloading!)
Love that you had the information at the start. Was nice to know the pairing upfront. Found it interesting to see the fonts used and I love that you did the thanks and credits. <3
I loved the ending, and it was so cute and yet wholesome and nothing felt forced or like out of place, aside from the third son being so forceful with the daughter. but it also fit the story!