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Unfortunately, you hit it right on the spot! I really intended this project to be something more (I had a long storyline and a longer relationship with Nick in my plans) but after all I came to the conclusion that if I made my first project THAT big, I wouldn't be able to finish it (Plus I needed the basic experience to understand how novels work)
So I removed 90% of the plot and just left Nick. A crazy guy who is addicted to the MC and wants to eat them up. Doesn't make much sense, just my fanaticism for the Hannibal series.
Thank you so much for your comment! Critique like this really help me! As soon as I finish all the endings, I'll start rewriting the intro part you saw in the DEMO right away.