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So I just finished the rough draft and it was definitely a whole experience. Following along Zack's journey had me laughing at times, it made me anxious and sometimes sad. The characters were realistic and relatable. A lot of the time it's all about the fantasy, which is nice in it's own way, but realism is harder to achieve and still be immersive.

The way it's presented, focusing on the evolving relationships with himself and those around him, was especially pleasant. As an asexual person this spoke to me very strongly. While I do enjoy those projects that focus on the sexual aspect, this was definitely a treat from start to finish.

I have books and stories I go back to over the years to read again and again. It doesn't matter how many times, or how often I read them, I'm enraptured by them every time. I have the feeling that this VN is going to be like that for me. 

It will be a true pleasure to see how the remake evolves the story in both writing and visuals; but I think I'm going to take the time to absorb this experience first before I jump back in.

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i really appreciate you sharing your thoughts. over the years a few people have referred to the story as an "experience" and i think it's still my favorite description of it so it means a lot to me that it had that much of an impact. I'm also glad that it checks the asexual box. rather than trying to list out all the sexual demographics, i wanted to take a different approach that was more inclusive without actually giving them titles. i think there's more individuality there and the idea was to make it more empowering. i've never been one to go back and reread things over and over. hell, i wrote this damn thing and i think i've only read the entire thing maybe 5 times and that's a bit iffy for me because it may not even be that many. but i'm humbled that you would add this story to your list and i'm grateful that you took the time to play it so thank you. and for sure, stick with the remake if you enjoyed this version, i think it's going to be a lot better. thanks for reading and i really appreciate you taking the time to check in <3