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good stuff! I remember reading the original comic and I think it being in game form adds to the mental transformations, I like being able to observe things and having different responses depending on your IQ. hope it gets updated frequently and finished, but I remember the comic being like 500+ pages long so I can see it taking a while. only criticism I have is it's not super clear when you can/should be looking around for extra dialogue and when you're not allowed to, the game seems to have a lot of trial and error that isn't a big deal right now but I could see it adding up if it gets longer. I never found the porn in the preview icon and the few times I tried looking around I was met with "I shouldn't be doing this right now" so I kind of just gave up after a while. 

that's a lot of negativity though for what I think is so far a promising VN. I think your mental degradation writing works super well for games and in the future I can see you potentially doing some interesting game design mechanics related to it. best of luck!

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Thanks for this comment! It's been super helpful reading your experiences with the extra dialogue options and the troubles you had with them. I've been working on a way to make them more obvious and unmissable.

I'm glad you enjoyed the original comic :D I'm really looking forward to having this game branch off in different directions depending on the choices the player makes. It's a really good format as, unlike in the comic, there are a whole bunch of directions the story can go in. But, like you said, it's going to take a while... Plus I'm still learning how to actually use Unity...
But hearing people enjoy it is really motivating! Thanks :D