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Hi, just finished everything (for the most part) my first playthrough (light side). I just have to say that, although I had my reservations when I first started like 3 days ago due to low-res texturing of the character models, I think that this game is amazing. the story up to this point is so well done a detailed I'm thoroughly invested in everything this game has to offer and look forward to seeing where things go from here. That said I would now like to go into detail on things I really liked about this game; things that I think could use work; a few of the story issues I had, and things I hope to see in future updates.

For starters I'll get right into the story "bugs" I saw that I think should be fixed. while most of the time I appreciated the freedom to explore at my own rate i found that in some cases this made key events of the story happen out of order. To that end i think it would be prudent to reevaluate the order at which certainly storylines take place and quest lock them behind other scenes that are relevant to providing context to the event that's out of order. i noticed it happen a few times and some of those weren't terribly significant to drastically change the story, however the scene that stood out the most to me that really broke the narrative for me was [spoilers] the Remoray (i think) scene where she, and Emma/Helen were preforming their autopsy on Tatsu and Emma/Helan were sneaking around Remoray's lab in search of any clue at how to develop an antidote, I saw this scene before I had even confronted Emma and asked about her past as Helen, where I would've learned about her split personality, as well as the scene where she wakes up from her nightmare and fights with herself to take back control and start doing the right thing. seeing the autopsy scene first really threw me for a loop and i think it definitely should be addressed. Another storyline that i got introduced to abruptly without any relevant context was the concept of Linus at all. The first time I heard the name mentioned was from my little 'Moonshines' Mama when went to their trailer to meet them for the first time and she did that spiritual reading of our character and I was so confused who this Linus was, while our character seemed to be in the loop without me knowing.  So yeah, please fix these issues, it'd be greatly appreciated. 

Now for what I really want to talk about, Sunflower Moonshine Baby Elisha Van Halen is hands down best girl!!! I just can't get enough of her content! Please sir can i have some more like a lot more. honestly, I think my top 5 favorite characters stories so far are Elsa, Emily, Hilda, Nina, and despite how little we actually see her Sarah. I love them and can't wait to build my harem with them as my main girls. Rose is a given too like she's easily number 6, only reason she's not high for me is her storyline stresses me TF out, i mean she in the "lion's den" right alongside you and it just makes me feel like she's always under constant threat and I'm horrified at the possibility of a father daughter NTR scene could be forced on me if I make a mistake. Beyond that I feel like a lot of the other characters aren't half as fleshed out as they should be by this point. So that's my take on the Waifus as for the scenes that i need more of, more bathroom scenes (the anatomy lesson scene in the bathroom with Hilda was Gold and honestly should be replayable), more pregnant sex (so far there hasn't been half as much pregnancy as I was expecting and really hope it'll be possible to get as many of the girls pregnant and come full circle as possible like with Nina). lastly, I just gotta praise the references that are so nicely sprinkled all over the place, given me quite a fair bit a chuckles here and there, and it really lightens things up where the story can get quite dark.

as for what i think needs work, the game could really use a quality-of-life overhaul that streamlines some thinks, like the quest log and UI to make things a bit simpler for the player to navigate, like maybe organize the quest log by day you can start stories and give tips as what characters are involved. add a new tab just for waifus in general with stats for the girls to keep tabs on what we've done and where to find certain girls at certain times. it would also be nice if once a girl's questline is completed you could implement passive options to have sex and whatnot in a similar way "Confined with Goddesses" allows you to replay non-story relevant scenes indefinitely. For example, at the currant stopping point of Nina's questline you can visit and find her sleeping in the Nursery, but you can't do anything that feels like it would be indicative of your relationship with her. the same issue with Elsa only its worse cause once you get to the end of where her questline is now you can't even find her anywhere in the game at this point and as she's she my favorite, it's just sad that I can't just go visit the trailer and breed my 'Moonshine'. even then main family members become unvisitable, and it just leaves things unsatisfying to reach the end of content and not have anything to do while waiting for the next update. finally take all the time you need to pack lewd town full of that hot creamy depth I've come to crave, but i have to ask when all is said and done is there any possibility that we could get a character model texture/render update that that fixes the clipping issues of the models when having sex and really polishes and makes the characters seem more realistic? if not that's perfectly fine I can still get off to this masterpiece but there's always room for improvement.

Whew. So yeah, that's about all I had to say. Sorry about the essay length review, I hope my feedback is helpful. I can't wait to see everything you do with this story, really well done my good dev, bravo.

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Woah! That's a long read. Thank you very much for the kind words and the detailed post. I'll go through all the feedback you mentioned one by one but TLDR; we listen to feedback and fix/change stuff accordingly.

Out of order events:
Thank you very much for letting us know, sometimes we're not aware of it so cheers for pointing that out. It's not easy juggling with over 400 events. I've added it to my notes so consider it fixed in Lewd Town Adventures 0.13.

Elsa:
Glad you like her. She'll have a new event in the coming update, in fact, you being a Good Path player, you're in for a treat as there are some massive new events for various characters and harem building.

Quality of life improvements including the journal:
The GUI already had an update last year and took lots of work/time to implement. We're not planning any changes to that soon, maybe when the game is done.

Having said that, we're always working on the game and try to improve earlier scenes as well. 0.13 has a new world map, an improved journal that's way more on point, hundreds of small bug fixes, inconsistencies and more.

This also connects to model texture/render updates:
In the past year we've remade over 50 scenes to improve to quality of the game.
There are still things that could absolutely have an upgrade, especially things leftover from the early to mid game. I've talked about that quite often over on Subscribe star. We will get to it but in waves as there are tons of other things to do when it comes to creating to games.

As for clipping, feel free to send me some examples through Discord because I'm not aware of any. We spend a lot of time making sure that doesn't happen and always fix things like that asap if it comes to our attention.
 
Repeat content and more to do when visiting certain characters:
We try to implement more repeat scenes and idle content and most characters have that, sadly for some we basically run out of time and leave it partially unfinished. Since it's a game in progress, they will all eventually have what you're asking for. It's one of the downsides building a game on such a big scale. At least all naughty scenes can be replayed in the gallery.

Closing words:
We care about the game, we invest massive amounts of time and will make sure it will be one of the biggest/lewdest adult games on the market (which it kinda already is I guess.)

From LTA 0.1 to LTA 0.13 there have been loads of changes made, basically every major update is a massive improvement and we'll continue to do so till the game is finished and we're both satisfied with every aspect of the game.

Cheers!

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Thank you for such a quick response, that's all really good to hear, as for the QoL stuff it's not an issue, whenever it suits you to upgrade, if you feel the need to is perfectly fine. it's not bad as is, I just always think about the, "but it could be better" aspect, and while only just discovering this game I hadn't know that the GUI had been recently improved on, so I don't mean to criticize what I can't recognize as an improvement, having no experience with the old.

As for the gallery, the scenes in the "Gallery" don't seem to be replayable but just a static image while the "Replays" tab are the only replayable scenes and there are far fewer of them. I guess what I'm getting at is it would be nice if the gallery wasn't just a static image from the scene, even if it were just a clip show replaying the events it'd be appreciated; for example as I mentioned in my first comment, the bathroom scene with Hilda is a gallery scene that's only represented by an image of our character trying to pull away as our mother try's to pull his face into her pissing vagina. For me any bathroom scene is just so hot (minus scat but thankfully it seems we're of the same mind in that regard) and the Hilda bathroom scene in particular is top notch which leaves me a bit bummed that it's not replayable but just a gallery image.

My issue with clipping isn't so much a problem with the game but in certain instances such as the sex scenes when it becomes apparent that it's simply a penis shaped cylindrical polygon being shoved into a pelvis shaped polygon, or like when Nina gives birth the spherical head polygon overlaps the pelvis polygon to the point you can't even tell it's supposed to be coming out her vagina. It's not a dire clipping issue its more of texture issue that I just think should be polished up in a more final release of the game. Vaginas are elastic and being a picture pasted on a polygon doesn't really evoke that elasticity and  kinda breaks immersion. 

So yeah, don't worry about it too much, it's not that much of an issue. They're just some things that I think should be touched on when you get to the point of polishing the game for a final release. Just keep doing what you're doing, cause you're doing a great job!

#Sunflower Moonshine Baby Elisha Van Halen is best girl!!!

Regarding the Nina birth event - it was my first attempt at that.

The engine and character model tools allow nearly unlimited manipulation of the individual sections and sub-sections of the skeleton and skin. At the time of rendering, it was the best I could do. The clipping was unavoidable with the knowledge I had during the construction and execution of that event. We knew it was a bit obvious and wonky, but overall passable.

Since then, I have improved significantly.

There's a balance to be struck with stretching a limited-pixel region beyond the original intended purpose or design. Something similar happens soon that is a vast improvement and shows just how much better I am at using the tools available in the studio we design these scenes within.

While we could go back and "fix" the existing images and animations, we are focused on moving forward to finish as much of the game itself as we can. Perhaps once we reach our final scenes in an epilogue, we may return to fix such things.

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on the topic of improving the game, perhaps a 'notebook' or something could be used for the involvements/side-quests of the non-primary characters. Moonshine's mom, Regina, Zoe, Chloe, and Cassie would be great to have updated journals or character logs for. Having the MC get a secure database from Chad to log/store and access said info --which would be for both personal and work logs -- would be a great touch. 

So glad you guys are making such great content and I really hope you never lose heart in this. To the future updates and beyond *CHEERS*