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So, just started up the new version and I immediately noticed something. Shortly after the player character wakes up they say "Hopefully I can get find some answers in there". I figure this was just a small mistake early in development but figured I would mention it should you ever want to polish this game further.

Edit: Found another minor error, when Amelia is telling the player they can borrow some clothes she says where instead of wear. I'll try to keep an eye out for any more of these minor issues. (Really hope I don't sound too nitpicky here, really love your stuff so far!)

gtsfan1581 year ago (2 edits) (+3)

New note, this one not an issue but maybe an oversight? Shortly after the scene mentioned just above the player character says they don't remember anything since waking up a few hours ago, but the game doesn't make it seem like anymore than a handful of minutes have passed. I suppose that she may have spent a long time wandering before stumbling upon the house but it seems odd for that to be the case without encountering monsters before the slime.

Edit: Another small maybe oversight. Right after draining the holstaurs the player character is lying on her boobs and says "these things heavy". I feel like putting an "are" in there would make it less awkward to read. Also goddammit you just had to put "hi I'm daisy" huh? I know what you've done.

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