I really like this pencil-drawn art you created for your spaces and objects, and also the palette you chose and how you applied it -- really nice! You integrated those objects into an interior with depth very well, and the sounds also gave me a nice sense of place. I especially liked the part of the narrative where the player can let out the scream, and how you created that. The narrative progressed smoothly for me, though I would enjoy being able to roam a bit more freely (e.g., to go into the attic or outside even when it doesn't advance the narrative yet, just to feel the sense of space). Nice!