I enjoyed the concept you went for and felt like you did a great job of injecting the humor in a way that didn't feel overly forced or out of place inside the game. Good narrative pacing between attempts, you can feel the narrator getting more and more annoyed.
Movement wise, I think it felt a little slippery and I had a hard time moving things around, especially at the beginning. I ended up shooting a box between levels multiple times, which was a little frustrating. However, once I got a handle on the movement and learned that jumping on top of the moving box stopped it, the game played a bit smoother and I felt like I was more in control. Overall, this was a fun submission and I had a good time playing and exploring the alternate "endings"