thank you very much for the detailed feedback, it was somewhat unexpected, but pleasant for me and very useful, and I'm trying to progress as much as I can.... if you want, you can rate my newer project that will still be updated.... I worked there on my drawing style and writing. actually lbb is basically my first experience writing anything so I really appreciate any help and feedback ♡
about Jeff, I made such a description on purpose, I thought that in this way I would destroy expectations about the character and reveal him from the other side as some psycho obsessed with Varai. I still think he is more adequate than others, at least he looks like that from the very beginning. he is a really nice and caring guy who loves his companions, but he has some problems..... though everyone in this gang has some problems, so I understand your feelings about Jeff
some questionable and unrealistic things can be explained by simulation, yn lbb is like a game within a game, but I will not constantly justify my creativity with this fact, so I will try to work on making scenes and routes better