Good job! :) The only thing I would point out, it would be nice to have the end more prominent, maybe just by adding one of the speech bubbles the 2Dkit has, commenting on finding the ship. Also the teleport was very sudden and surprising, considering you didn't even use the actual teleport sprite, so the player has no way of anticipating what's about to happen (at least to me of a cthulu like creature doesn't exactly scream "teleport to safety").
Take this as food for thought for your next work and assignments :)