Hey man thank you so much for the feedback! Above all else I'm an artist, so I'm glad you liked what art was in the game!
I also appreciate the writing tips and code help - this is my first game jam game; Before this, I've only ever really dabbled with Twine, and I have little to no coding experience. I'm not surprised there's some issues with audio, ui, etc. I'll try to take the advice to heart and remember that for other projects!
Thank you, again, for making time for my game! I was blown away to see someone make a video about mine, tbh :D!