Gotta say, the grammatical and spelling errors make it very difficult to get through the game. At one point I began to wonder if it was all intentional because a character said "holier than though" and the MC corrected her by saying "holier than thou". Problem is, the author uses "thou" when he means "though" throughout the entire game! The errors are too numerous, however, to be intentional.
Then there are all the times that someone refers to a kind loved one as if they're constantly perspiring (sweetie versus SWEATY). "I am" is improperly abbreviated as "I'm" far too often. "I'm, I swear I'm." WHAT???
The MC is even referred to as "MC" many times rather than the name you choose. Two-letter words have only one letter. There are too many errors to name here. Write slower and edit your work.
Fix your references to michelle_office_5.webm through _7 (you use michelle_office5_.webm etc.)
Trying not to spoil anything, but how is a girl (Cammy) who has never been able to/cannot possibly tan in the sun supposed to have tan lines?
So much time is spent in the intro getting us to choose between harem and NTR modes, only to say "PSYCH! THERE IS NO NTR MODE!" Just take this out completely! Have two different START choices on the main menu! Don't waste my time! The content is going to be so different anyway that it'll be two different games...
Very simplistic advancement through the game and very easy to miss dialogue because of it. Once I finally got beyond the errors and just went through the story I was able to enjoy it enough.