I like it, I'm looking forward to more!!
The Only thing for me is the inconsistency with choices. I chose to be silent in the office, yet the dialogue from the man, is as if he cut MC off from speaking. Then when speaking to Callum in the dorm; I feel like the last option 'You have no more questions' shouldn't be available until AFTER we ask all the questions. Because I personally didn't ask any and just clicked that option, yet the dialogue automatically assumes you did anyway.