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Just finished my first playthrough! Well, my first two, since I couldn't decide between A and X and ended up running two saves simultaneously to not miss out haha! I absolutely adored every moment! My partner actually got a bit annoyed because I just could not stop gushing to them about the characters you've created and the world you've built. I had to make an account just to say: thank you so much for sharing this with the world. 

Also, and I apologize if a comment is an inappropriate place to say so, I'd love to offer to support in proofreading the text, even if just for the currently released chapters. The only thing that occasionally pulled me out of the story were the small grammatical / syntactical errors one cannot help but make when writing a text of such length. I'd be more than happy to discuss it more via private message, if you're interested, and can provide a bit of background information on myself and experience in this area. 

Thank you, again, forth this story. I look forward to following and supporting it for a long time to come!

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Thanks for the offer, but I already have beta readers who I'm quite happy with! I prefer to have feedback regarding the substance (plot, characters, worldbuilding), typos and things of that nature I can correct while continuing to update the story. You can always report any typos or errors you find using the Google form for bug reports.

Thanks for the lovely comment as well 💖