The game was very interesting, and I definitely feel like you have a lot of points to make there, and it is designed in ways that are quite innovative, it definitely made me think about narratives, hopefully the kickstarter works out and I can get to see the full version one day!
I actually didn't have a problem with the amount of dialogue, but similarly I had trouble remembering who was who, and the screen panning back and forth when different people were speaking made me sort of dizzy.
It would be great if there could be an option to review the previous text, just in case people clicked too fast and missed something, but couldn't go back to check. And sometimes I clicked on the button to talk just to see what my options are, but I didn't really like any of them, so I wish there could have been an option to back out of talking.